SliceOfDog's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mouse: A Documentary]

You have potential. Unfortunately, your ability with claymation is much greater than your ability with writing, and to a lesser extent voice acting. Just swearing and having random violence doesn't make a video funny.
Don't give up, but I'd suggest you try collaborating with other writers and voice actors, with you as the animator.

SebDaigle responds:

Thank you for the critisism! this claymation was also voiced freely without writing anything down just to see if it felt less static than writing it all down. I agree that just swearing and violence doesn`t make a video funny, and i`m far from giving up because i`m thankful that there are people out there like yourself that give honest feedback! I`m still trying to find my niche for comedy and animation style and see what audience my videos bring and just general feedback. I may actually take your advice about collaborating with other writers and voice actors and me being the animator. I could learn a bit from that instead of it being me mostly

[Angry Dog - Blood Shower]

Great animation and voices

The animation was practically spotless. I can't think of another flash with lip syncing that perfect. The only problem was that the humour didn't quite match up to the rest of the flash. It was good enough to make me want to see the next one, but based on the skill of the animation and voices, I'd expect a bit of a better script. Oh well, it was still damn good.

Sexual-Lobster responds:

aah but it's building up! glad you liked it anyway.

[The Sicksons]

Just not good

You get a one star for somewhat attempting the voices. That's it. Seriously, this was just not good. And it was hardly sick. Yeah, Bart talks about rape. Whoop de doo, lets put you on the front page.
Just plain terrible.

Oney responds:

Frowny Face :(

[[STAIN]]

I don't get it...

Some bits were ok, and I appreciate that it was experimental, but seriously, what was that all about? It certainly wasn't the worst flash I've ever seen, but I'm finding it hard to come up with constuctive comments, cause I have no idea what direction it's supposed to be going in.
You said youself that it was very experimental, and I've not seen your other flashes, so I'm sorry if this is nothing like what you usually do, but having only seen this one, I'm pretty lost for words. In a bad way.

ReZTeR responds:

Art may be an unfathomable idea to you but this piece is complete concept, not a pretty little illustrated story.

[Dr Steel's Fibonacci Seq]

Dr Steel for World Emperor!

This brings us one Flash closer to the utopian playland.

starkravenmadd responds:

Huzzah!

[A Gothic Holiday Tale]

Hurray

I saved Farmer Tom's life. Although I'm not sure he deserved it. Who walks up to a hideous abomination in a thunder storm? Ya just don't!
Anyways, that was one of the best flashes I've seen in a while. I just wish you could have skipped to the choice again. I couldn't be bothered to watch the whole thing (A course I'm impatient as hell) but I must admit I'm curious.

Daystorm responds:

Thanks! Yes, someone else mentioned that and I think it's a good idea. I'll have to add that option when I have some time. Thanks for viewing and for the kind words. Glad you liked it!